1. Main Idea or Topic - this helps our reader understand what our paragraph is about.
2. Detail - these sentences help build on our main idea.
3. Example or Evidence - this information helps our reader make connections with the information in our paragraphs.
We decided that we wanted to try writing paragraphs to help introduce the environment of our school to a visitor. Mr Lewzey showed us how we could publish these in a special app called ThingLink so we have been able to take photos and add our paragraphs to these. We hope you enjoy reading them.
Ko:
Lachlan:
Hannah:
Hayley:
Tobias:
Josh:
Tyler:
John Paul:
Hudson:
Fergus:
Gabriel:
David:
Ella:
Roy:
Marawan:
Maxim:
Wow these are amazing! I love how you can click on the picture to read your colourful and descriptive sentences. And great too that you are publishing your writing in new ways. Well done guys!
ReplyDeleteGreat work learners! You've made some very astute observations about your environment with some imaginative perspectives around the school. Looks like you've found a great new tool to help capture your ideas.
ReplyDeleteAmazing! So impressed with the creative way you have described our school environment within such beautiful pictures. Well done to you all.
ReplyDeleteamazing. It was an opportunity to read their thoughts.
ReplyDeleteHi year 3/2 students
ReplyDeletemy name is Laycen and I am a student yr 6 at hay park school.I was really impressed with the think links that you all did and the effort you put into them.I was really impressed to see work like this by yr 2/3 students.For next steps I would recommend doing at least 2/3 comments on each image
Blog ya later - Laycen